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We all walked into the house and when Lennox tried too walk in Opal shut the door. “Hey! He’s helping us! Let him in!” I shouted, “Ya!” Jet said. Opal just rolled her eyes at us “You guys trust EVERYONE!” She groaned, “Their not the only ones!” Said Pheniox “I don’t wanna die!” Opal stomped her foot “What the f*ck! You guys are being a**holes right now! Seriously!” I went over too the door and opened it. “Sorry about that.” I sighed, “Your welcomed here.” Lennox just simply grinned and walked in “Why Thank you! SO nice to meet you all!” He glared at all of us. “I think we’ll make a GREAT team!” Sylvester raised one eyebrow “Can’t tell if your being sarcastic, hun.” Lennox frowned but then turned it into a smile “No! Of course not! We will do this together!” He grinned.
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