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I have the rough outline of my story for english class and i need reviews, be as harsh as you want time guy gets arrested in a bar, detective tries to interrogate him, time guy tries to go back in time, detective goes to stop him but then they both go back in time and then the detective causes a paradox by being 2 places at once and then opens a wormhole and dies. time guy the garbs past detective and then they have to go back to the future to get the time guy out of the bar before the detective gets there (Time guy doesnt cause the wormhole because he weilds the time powers) and then the og time guy has to die so there arent 2 time guys running around the timeline and then time guy is shown telling this story to an old decrepit detective and then yeah.
- Published May 12, 2022, 10:43
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