gonna take a shower cus im gross

 

but heres some comic/novel ideas ive had for a few years (im putting these vaguely, theres a lot more to them that i cant mention or else id be here for hours explaining it) First one takes place in a dystopian era, where meat or plants are really fucking scarce. you are literally praised if you possess steak. its about a guy named Gayle, who fucks people at gay bars a lot and has no life. a lot of people love him due to his charisma. at the same time, hes in a toxic relationship with a demon by the name present, and theyre really shit for each other. theres a lot of garbage about sexual abuse and manipulation i threw in it. Gayle thinks present is a hallucination and that hes schizophrenic. of course, thats not the case, and it bites him in the ass later on. gayle never takes present seriously and constantly ignores him, while also pursuing in a sexual relationship with him, and it fucks both of them up a lot. present is only in the overworld to distract from his duties as the prince of hell. satans on his deathbed and present refuses to rule hell and puts it off for a while, which makes his situation worse even after he kills gayle, who, even though shared many bad memories with him, was still the love of his life. lowkey this barely explains the full story but i dont care okay its part of a 3 part series im making so suck my dick second one is about the idea of how physical empathy would work its also dystopian. again, suck my dick. basically every child has a device surgically implanted in them that makes them have physical empathy. so, if you tell someone "you're really cute!", youll feel like someone just told you that you look cute. if you give someone a hug, youll feel like youre being hugged back (regardless of what the person youre hugging is doing) if you tell someone "i hate you!", youll feel like someone just told you that they hate you. if you stab someone, youll feel like you just got stabbed and this whole concept works for a while, as the intention is to course people into treating others nicely, and to stop wars and shit but this whole thing falls apart when someone somehow gets this device removed. they become a dictator, with overwhelming power. they cant be hurt. they basically treat everyone like slaves, they use them for labor and it becomes some kind of hell cycle where the slaves can only be nice toward their new leader, as fighting back would cause them the same amount of pain and more okay thats all im gonna tell yall because im a trash writer and im getting self conscious, so bye bye im gonna go take a long shower

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